I love the list style of this poem. It has great rhyming. Really good.
Thank you very much!
The use of slant rhyme is so powerful in here. I usually think poems that rhyme feel forced (using words that rhyme at the sake of sounding stupid), but this is great!
On my name
Restrained
Under chains
So powerful.
hey poetpath (Stephanie),
I read the excerpt, and wow… my heart. You’ve been through so much and I honestly can’t believe you’re still standing. You had to watch your Aunt die and then your mom tried to kill herself in the room next to you?? I don’t know how you come back from that, but clearly you’re here and you’re telling the story. Congratulations.
Writing-wise, it was so compelling. I may buy the book! (in the hopes of an uplifting ending, as well as learning the rest of the story). good luck with this and all your future endeavors.
Lindsay thank you! I will let you know the official release is this Saturday! If you do buy it, order from me directly if you’d like to. Thank you much for the wishes. I indeed plan to publish as much as i can. I look forward to seeing your talent in writing published as well . The sky is the limit
I love the list style of this poem. It has great rhyming. Really good.
Thank you very much!
The use of slant rhyme is so powerful in here. I usually think poems that rhyme feel forced (using words that rhyme at the sake of sounding stupid), but this is great!
On my name
Restrained
Under chains
So powerful.
hey poetpath (Stephanie),
I read the excerpt, and wow… my heart. You’ve been through so much and I honestly can’t believe you’re still standing. You had to watch your Aunt die and then your mom tried to kill herself in the room next to you?? I don’t know how you come back from that, but clearly you’re here and you’re telling the story. Congratulations.
Writing-wise, it was so compelling. I may buy the book! (in the hopes of an uplifting ending, as well as learning the rest of the story). good luck with this and all your future endeavors.
Lindsay thank you! I will let you know the official release is this Saturday! If you do buy it, order from me directly if you’d like to. Thank you much for the wishes. I indeed plan to publish as much as i can. I look forward to seeing your talent in writing published as well . The sky is the limit