Heated slightly weeded
While steep on sleep.
Insomnia defeats
Chopped up rest
My brains a mess
Tonight for no reason no rest
Because I stress
Satisfaction seems too far
What’s it take to be in his heart?
If he were more serious
My thoughts wouldn’t be delirious.
I need to know I must!
Are you scared of my love?
Do you feel wary of us?
Defeated I feel
The backburner is real
Your heart doesn’t beat the same
Saying you miss me is repetitive and lame
Yet it’s always the same
Gambling in the love game
To fail at us 3 times
Would be a shame
Act like you miss me!
Act like you need me!
Or else I’m ghost
Wait and see!
Leaving me to be lost
Sad and sick
My mind starts racing and
My angst weighs heavy like bricks
All I want to do is make our souls mixed
Think of how we ended up like this
After almost 2 years
You’ve seen my tears and my fears
Tell me I am yours!
That love is ours!
For us I’d build us up
Strong like steel towers
We can start as best friends
Then as lovers
I want you next to me
At night spooned in covers
While holding my body
Perfectly next to yours
Its then I smile
As my heart soars miles
Thinking this could be forever
Easily we can love
Sky’s the limit
Like the stars above
What are you thinking of?
My laugh, my jokes?
My strong attitude?
Or my mouth that revokes?
Come easily into this love
While holding my hand
Love is equipped with a manual
It has no plan
Working at it day after day
Is how we’ll keep us
From going astray
I want you to want me!
I want you to need me!
Only out of your real love
Give us both
What we been dreaming of.
Poetry
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Poetry is a perfect medium to express the ultimate broken heart or longing soul story and I think you’ve done a great job in doing that here. The poem has at first a very chaotic feel but gradually becomes more optimistic which is an unexpected turn I liked.
This line was especially powerful and gives the reader a better perspective of the person’s character:
My laugh, my jokes? My strong attitude or my mouth that revokes?
Revokes is such a great word; it’s always important to challenge yourself by using an expanse of vocabulary. Keep up the good work!
I really appreciate your advice , I will heed for sure! Thank you! I work as a bartender and I do this on my spare time. I always found myself to be strong in English and writing but for some reason I like poetry more. I latch to it