This is such a creative piece. I have never read anything like it, and I enjoyed reading it. It is short, but straight to the point. I think this type of writing is better when short. My favorite part is, “Entwined in rhythmic lines.” I like that these line rhyme, and I think that “entwined” and “rhythmic” are both beautiful words that also correlate to the meaning of this work.
Thank you very much. I like to switch it up. Most people only write dark poetry. I have variation of all kinds . Please feel free to read more of my work.
This is such a creative piece. I have never read anything like it, and I enjoyed reading it. It is short, but straight to the point. I think this type of writing is better when short. My favorite part is, “Entwined in rhythmic lines.” I like that these line rhyme, and I think that “entwined” and “rhythmic” are both beautiful words that also correlate to the meaning of this work.
Thank you very much. I like to switch it up. Most people only write dark poetry. I have variation of all kinds . Please feel free to read more of my work.