Love is universal. Everyone wants to be loved and cared for. One thing we have in common is that we want to succeed and live an amazing life. It’s vital to enjoy life to its fullest and be grateful and appreciate all that is yours and that God made. Being innovative and untraditional is the key to being the a philosopher. Be as creative, unique, and intuitive as you can and think deeply and philosophically. Live a life of purpose.
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I see myself in this poem.
All very true. I am specifically intrigued by your mention of being untraditional, creative and unique. Creating our own way of life and refusing to live “traditionally” can really open doors.
The thoughts you wrote about are important. I like how you wrote about the idea of everyone craving love in the same piece that you talked about living a life of purpose. We must love ourselves if we want to be loved. We must better ourselves, focus on ourselves, and be the best version of ourselves that we can be.
I think this could be a really powerful piece if you kept going and made it longer.