Okay, first off I’m 26 and I just REALLY SUCK AT SPELLING. Bad enough that auto correction and spellcheck don’t help with that. I’m going to start using this site for a few reasons.
The biggest is to write my story that I hope will turn out to be a vary good novel. Also if you want to read with out being informed be for hand I recomened not reading this
The other is to get criticisms and feed back and maybe even some ideas if I’m in writers block (names would also be nice since I’m bad with naming things my stories wont necessarily be PG but they won’t be too bad. I think the worse offender will be language.
So that is my introduction out of the way.
So to start the info that is for the lore and not necessarily going to be in the book this is to help me stay in tune with my worlds rules and not have plot holes in my story.
The first thing that needs to be talked about here is a space giant (this in a living creature that lives in space. It’s name has not been decided yet. This bad boy (this is an asexual creature and does not need a partner to spawn) is highly intelligent when it is able to live on its own and start a civilization upon its body (it lives in space there is no back to this creature like you and I would have) it takes about 2,000 years for this to happen and by that time this creature has interacted with other spaces and culture and has learned more then we could in 100 life times and that not even close to scratching it at this point) this civilization has a generic form with minor differences based on the habitat that forms around the body of this creature (the habitat is formed depending on the gas it feeds on from nebulous and the minerals in the dust, the habitats can be anywhere from -200 degrees to 2000 degrees Fahrenheit) the one the 2 protagonist will live on is aquatic so they mostly live under water.
This will be my first break point to see what I can get from the community.
Okay so have some new info for those that don’t care so much a about spoler info so if you do the bag logs of my story where not for you any way now that the story is up go read that (tho its not much at this point)
So the criecher that moves through space most of you buy now more then likely thought space wale well lets just say that is 100% wrong. The way it looks if your looking at it through a telliscope you would think its just some comet. now for a size comparision for the one the main chariters live on just the other side of the moon would be the tail end of this beast and its face would be tuching the ocean of our earth. Our earth only takes up 1/4 of its face from the center of earth. There is no speasies name for them (at least as far as they care). They do have names that are uneak to each one sepritly bassed on the lanwiges that forms from the civilation that forms on there body. The one that our main charicters live on is called Takkar.
Okay our main char for the mail book is named Hekkhar and the female char for the female book is named Heskar (yes im going to right each main char as a point of view belonging to thier own books.
the sister was born from an exparment that the mother and a humen did to gether in secret and thus she is half humen (this will be relivent later)
additionally I need a human person to spell check what I write and I have no money but the reason being is spell check rarely fined the words I mean and our brains can take the context to be able to replace with the right words even if the word in that place is wrong our brains will auto correction it on its own (tho I know what I’m trying to portray I don’t always know the words or the spelling)
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