No next time
I’ll press rewind
To make sure
I’m the first one
Coming
In climaxes door
You leaving me high
and DRY
Wasn’t fine but I
Seen all the signs
To that no surprise
Yet in due time
I’ll see the light
Because next time
I won’t be so kind
Inviting you inside
For us climbing
Into my bed for
Sensual combining
Only to just remind
YOU were the one
That drew the line
Causing our divide
Poetry
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I think this poem has great rhythm to it. I could hear it clearly in my head, and it’s about something that everyone feels at one point or another in a relationship, some sadly more often than others.
Even the
I / Seen
doesn’t bother me in this context the way it usually does. Thanks for a good quick read.
Thanks, I would have changed the I/seen but it flowed . I like to get a little untraditional once in a while. I go against the grain at times