Do the right thing darling and say goodbye.
When I was sailing on high waters, sorrow in my heart.
The moon shone on the red mountains and I spilled my chi.
My nervous demeanor meets your smile like it did from the start.
Picture us in a meadow on the beach lying side by side
Sleeping under the moon stars start to sigh
Tell me to get a job and go to school cause I ain’t no fool
Push me in shallow water until my clothes dry
I hear a tiger roar soon he begins to snore
Szatem bon crem qo te de zipolite
Fixated on you is it I’m too new?
Surplus of smiling keep my hands at a distance
Shza que lee I wish I never met me
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This has some novel imagery in it, coupled with surreal descriptions and language. If I could put Salvador Dali’s artwork into words, I imagine it would have a similar style to your piece.
I love the imagery in this piece. I can picture everything so perfectly. You had a ton of nature-based images which brought me into the piece easily. I love the first line, it may even be my favorite one. I would like to see even more of this style, maybe an extension of this poem.