You want to scream at the girl, strutting across the room. Her pure british accent rings around the room. Then you look at the girls next to her. They think they’re the best. They think they’re special.
‘Blonde,’ You think, noting that every single one of them is blonde. You put on a fake smile as they pass and move out of the way. They give you the same fake smile back and continue walking, whispering and laughing.
But they’ll never know you hate them, because you’ll never say.
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I’m not as proud of this piece. I was at a major writer’s block and just wrote how I felt. Also, I mean no offense to blonde people. I have many blonde friends and they act nothing like this
I am a young writer as well. In fact, I turned sixteen last month. I am blonde, but I agree with you . . . girls that are on the cheerleader squad (usually blonde) think they are the cat’s pajamas. Just a heads up though. I am smart and it’s not because of my hair color. There are plenty of smart, intelligent, girls who are blonde out there. It’s not the hair color that makes them, “Kinda Dumb,” it’s their lack of brains. XD How old are you, young writer? I really like your work!!
I did not mean any offense and I’m so sorry, it’s just a stereotype that fits into my life. As I said I have many blonde friends that are extremely nice and smart and friendly. I cannot give you my actual age but I am within 10-13. And I’m so glad you enjoy my work!
You say you were experiencing writer’s block, but you certainly can’t tell! There’s no need to give a disclaimer to your piece. I especially like the snapshot quality, and the way you’ve only included the necessary details lets the reader design and make their own assumptions about the characters.
Keep writing!
-RAR
????? you so much! I see so many amazing writers out there (such as yourself) and I always try my best!
I know you didn’t mean any offense at blondes. Trust me, sometimes I wish the population of blondes were a little bit smarter. Plus the blondes out there . . . aren’t true blondes. They dye their hair. XD Keep it with the AWESOME work!
????? you so much! I realize most of the blondes out there are fake, but they do it because they don’t like what color hair they have. What color eyes they have. So they change it.
*keep it up* meant that. Typed too fast.
XD I do that all the time!