the confusion sets in
i don’t know what to do
im not going back
theres nothing between me and you
i forgave the transgression
i still wanna be friends
but when i say good bye
thats the finale, the end.
i cant let you hurt me
i will never again open my heart
to the one who made me cry
i just wanna move on and have a fresh start
Poetry
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I enjoy your use of space here. You’ve set this poem up into three distinct parts that convey a particular emotion all under the umbrella of confusion. Your lack of enjambment is perfect in my opinion because it makes each part seem more akin to “stream of consciousness” type writing. I’m curious to know if you put much thought into your “i”s? You use the lower case to refer to yourself instead of upper case. Is there a reason for that or did you just do it?
Thank you, honestly I think it’s subconscious when I’m depressed.
You’re welcome. I hope that this tactic only pertains to your writing. You’re important and should know that.