i love you at my toughest
and no I do not regret it
but now your trying to leave
and I’m hurting
no one understands how I feel
imagine waking up and feeling like your worth something
imagine having someone who makes you feel alive
who makes you feel like your normal even when you both know your not
the late night talks and phone calls
being there for each other and venting to each other
or when you can finish each other sentences
or the butterflies y’all get everytime y’all see each other
you guys know each other so well
more then y’all know yourselves
but none of this matter because they want to leave
now imagine going back to being depress
feeling lonely feeling hurt because you felt like if you were good enough they would of stayed
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This poem really speaks out to people who have their heartbroken. This is a nice powerful poem you have created. However, I think to make this poem even grander if you have the speaker over come their heartbreak. If you are unhappy about changing the ending of your poem then I suggest to create a sister poem. That way the poem will be even more powerful and encourage people who have had their hearts broken to overcome there depression.
thanks love