It’s four in the morning
full moon window glare
moonlight softly your face adorning
can’t help but at your beauty stare
my heart moved as an angel you lay
I thank God earnest heart
such a beautiful woman given
Michelangelo couldn’t paint
lovely scene as you here in the half dark
in the early morning beautiful
I don’t believe Shakespeare could write
what I’m feeling through my body and spirit
nothing this earth move me like the sight
as you lay so softly and beautifully here
Webster would be puzzled to define
such loveliness lying here so near
as I look to the heavens
thank God with all my might
morning beauty early delight
Pretty blonde hair complimenting the pillow
as shiny silk spread so delicately on white
the moonlight glistens as you seem to glow
even some lover as told of Romeo
would look at you and be uptight
my desire to touch is with held
as a beautiful diamond behind glass
only to be seen, not touched or felt
early morning beautiful, an elegance of class!
Photo Credit – Pixabay.com ..by Antranias
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This was beautiful. I wish some dude would say this to me. It does have a couple errors though. I think you need a few more revisions so your readers can completely immerse in the romance. One of the things I wish you would do is make the sentences lower case. Making the sentences lower case is all up to you; it’s just style. But when the sentences are upper case it makes me think your thought is completed when actually you are continuing.
I say this in asking for help, could you please tell me more ..thanks
Thank, you are right, thanks again for your help.
Sorry ..I think you are right and thanks for your help.