Prologue
“DO THE DISHES,” Mommy orders, holding a pink plate with broccoli and noodles on it.
“I already cleaned my room!” I whine.
“Do the dishes,” Mommy growl, holding her hand up. I cringe as her hand lands on my cheek. My head snaps to the side and I reach up to feel the stinging skin.
“Yes, Mommy,” I murmur, tears filling my eyes.
“Good girl, Jade.” Mommy pats my head gently as I scrub a plate. I whimper softly and continue cleaning, pouring dish soap in a water bottle and turning on the water.
Note:: the title to this isn’t very good and I just made it up last-minute, so if you have any suggestions, leave them down below!
Realistic Fiction
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Also, comment any grammatical mistakes you find because this is unedited!
Hi TYW!
An explosive prologue, though very short. I haven’t read the next installment, but I’m expecting something to come from this event. I get the feeling this might not be the protagonist’s real mother–or maybe it is but something has happened to her mind– so that’s already a sneaking suspicion in my mind.
As for grammar, “Mommy growl” (should be growls). Also, why is the first line in bold?
On to the next part! 🙂