Ohh I really enjoyed reading your poem. I think the message here is a speaker dealing with addiction to cigarettes. The last line, “my lungs must hate me but you love me enough for both of us”, lead me to believe this. I do suggest to go back and add more to your poem. Do not tell the reader about the speaker’s addiction, but show them through writing. I do suggest to keep the last line, but edit it a little. This poem was good, keep going!