Girl power means having the power to help the world with your mind. Picking and choosing what to remember and think about and write about. Philosophize and analyze and strategize and rationalize to have a productive life. think deeply to have a good life. Girl power means the power to do what you want with your powers. Control yourself all the time and keep the ultimate goal in mind. Be true to yourself. Rationalize to get to the bottom of every situation. Strategize to get through the day. Live a productive life. We all have girl power in us.
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I think you have the bones of something really inspiring here. You just need to further explain all the points you brought up and this could be a cool, inspirational essay.
Stray thoughts- watch your grammar. Some of your sentences don’t feel like sentences, more like part of one. Have a more impactful ending and remind the reader of your original point. In writing such as this, vague language is detrimental. Explain girl power in all it’s meanings.
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I think this is really a powerful poem. There is something definitive about this poem, and the way you defined the term “girl power” makes this all the more important. i really enjoyed this.