Today it will be a good day,
I hope so,
Let me throw some oil outside the door, and put a black dot behind my ear.
My husband says when I laugh a lot I get sick.
How funny is that!
My kids got sick due to some infection when they were little, not sure, but I did put a black dot behind ear, to save them from black eye.
We care for our loved ones.
This is superstition, I am sure. But who stops you?
Stay happy… But it is such a gloomy day!
Rain all day! …
Today is a good day!
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I really enjoy how superstitions are the main concern of this piece.
Suggstions:
-“Today it would be good day”: With this line, do you want to change it into the future tense? If so, the line can be revised as the following: “Today it will be >a< good day"
-"My kids got sick due to some infection I am not sure": Perhaps adding punctuation between "infection" and "I".
-"one's": Try using "ones". Apostrophe isn't necessary here! : )
Question:
Is this to be a poem or a piece of information?
Thank you for sharing this adorable piece! I really enjoyed hearing about these two new superstitions!
Can't wait to read more!
Michelle R.
Thanks for correction. Really appreciate you read my thoughts.
today just be you, live your life, enjoy Today. nice write