Hi there my name is Desdemona Succubus aka SabrinaSuccubusstar and this a little vintage murder story I wiped up called. The Witch Board Treasure. Kimberley it dancing on stage getting during a stage rehearsal when an otherwise handsome yet puzzling young man dressed sharply walks into Bella Dame Burlesque and says he must speak to a busty redhead named Kimberley. A black hair slender and short little pixie of a woman points to the stage. The climbs the stage like a stealthy panther ready to meet it’s prey head-on and we he reaches Kimberley he says Hello beautiful and Kimberley asks what business do you have with me and how do you know my name handsome???. My name is Benjamine and I’am here to inform you that your uncle Samuel is dead and you can company me to England in order to collect your inheritance along with your sister( says the young man). And what I don’t honey. (says Kim to Ben) your money will go to another person in your familey. Oh I see then can you tell me what it is he wants me and my sick sister to have darling (Kim). You have no reasons to worry your sister will be protected and taken care of by nurse you have should be coming soon I have all the time in the world so go back to your dancing I will wait for you at the bar pretty( Ben). After Ben treats Kim to some coffee and some pie at a fancy bakery and he walks her to her apartment not very far her the burlesque house. She turns the lock on her apartment door and enters with Ben. Her german shepard and pug run up to her as she removes her coat and turtle neck sweater. So how did you end up in Italy. (Ben to kim). It is more exotic and charming than mother land the good old USA. (Kim to Ben). Now come along I want you to see my twin sister Kelly (Kim). Sure okay redhead (Ben). Kimberley opens the door for her sister’s room and see something freaky. Ho my what in the world is that(Kim )???
Mystery
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Sorry if I misspell things just bare with me readers I will post more of this story thanks for reading.
Most likely I will forget to put words in my story opps sorry I know I have done this already.
Hey! Nice story. Just some basic formatting suggestions: you can see how it’s all messed up. take a few extra minutes and fix it before posting. Also, you know there’s missing words and stuff, so read through it a second time before posting. And when you type or copy and paste something when you post on this site, a red line appears under misspelled words, so you can fix that.
Create something you can be proud of.
Okie then,im new to this website,and ive published some of my own. Any advice?please if you do 😀