I know I am alright
Sleeping next to you
I know I am alright when
You hold me tight and
Kiss me good night you
Mean the world to me
That’s how I know I am alright
Poetry
3 Comments on “I know I am alright”
I love the use of repetition in this piece, I believe that’s what really ties it all together. It’ crazy because the first time I read it for some strange reason I interpreted it as “I know I am right” instead of “I know I am alright.” When I read poems I begin to think of the story the poet might be telling and in this poem I thought of someone who is with someone that is not “good.” But then they feel great next to them so they are convincing themselves that it is OK to engage with this person.
I love the rhyme scheme and it works well as an un-traditional poem. So that’s fancy talk for saying that it’s pretty solid. On your next poetry run, you should experiment with different words and the structure of stanzas. I would like to see more stuff from you! Keep it up!
Thank ypu❤
The repetition of this piece is really good! As well, the line breaks in your poem are done fantastically as well. My suggestion is to not make the first line of your poem your title. I think your piece would be really good if you made the title of your poem the message. However, this is a really good piece. Nice job!
I love the use of repetition in this piece, I believe that’s what really ties it all together. It’ crazy because the first time I read it for some strange reason I interpreted it as “I know I am right” instead of “I know I am alright.” When I read poems I begin to think of the story the poet might be telling and in this poem I thought of someone who is with someone that is not “good.” But then they feel great next to them so they are convincing themselves that it is OK to engage with this person.
I love the rhyme scheme and it works well as an un-traditional poem. So that’s fancy talk for saying that it’s pretty solid. On your next poetry run, you should experiment with different words and the structure of stanzas. I would like to see more stuff from you! Keep it up!
Thank ypu❤
The repetition of this piece is really good! As well, the line breaks in your poem are done fantastically as well. My suggestion is to not make the first line of your poem your title. I think your piece would be really good if you made the title of your poem the message. However, this is a really good piece. Nice job!