Third posting:
………I wish I could feel the wind blowing on my face; but that isn’t the case. I wish I could smell the flower petals as they fell; but I can’t. I wish I could taste the sweet sadness that one has chased; but its to far away.
I wish I could be in your arms away from all harms; but your already gone.
…I wish.
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Being in love can make everything seem brighter, smell better, even taste better.but falling out of love just turns everything to dust.
I really liked the use of anaphora throughout, repeating the phrase “I wish, I wish” over and over really emphasizes the pain of the narrator.