The day started out with a hopeful note, but as i progress on, everything feels the same. The familiarity is too evident. I must press on to the unfamiliar places, the unheard voices, the unspoken choices. This is “my” mountain and i must climb today or i will forever be disarrayed from my ‘True’ purpose in life. Whatever it may be, i must press on, i must press on. I have a destiny and it is up to me to pursue it, to uncover it, to establish it.
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This is really uplifting and a great affirmation. Your message is clear, that one can overcome stagnation by persevering to achieve one’s objective in life, whatever that might be. At least that’s what I gathered from the piece. I might mention that the speech begins by referencing a specific day but then the tone becomes very broad. I would actually keep the broad tone and start out by saying something like:
[Oftentimes I awake and am stricken with feelings of hope,] but as I progress on….
or something that creates a general feeling instead of presenting one instance.
Thanks for sharing, keep up the great work!
Thank you for the advice, i will be sure to use that input in my next writing. I like your approach, it’s different.