I have never had the chicken pox, but I was scratching when I read your story. I loved how you used repetition in your piece. It really put emphasis on the word “bump” and “Itchy scratchy”. I do suggest you delete the first line of your poem, because it is the title of your piece and sounds redundant. Also, I would extend your piece. I think adding more repetition and other literacy elements could really strengthen your piece. This is a great poem!
I have never had the chicken pox, but I was scratching when I read your story. I loved how you used repetition in your piece. It really put emphasis on the word “bump” and “Itchy scratchy”. I do suggest you delete the first line of your poem, because it is the title of your piece and sounds redundant. Also, I would extend your piece. I think adding more repetition and other literacy elements could really strengthen your piece. This is a great poem!
Thank you