Life is a gift from God. Every day is a blessing. Live every day to praise Lord. Live your life with a sense of purpose. Live life for enjoyment and to accomplish things. Never do wrong things. Have fun and live your best life yet!
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This is an extremely short yet meaningful paragraph of prose. It can act as a much needed reminder for someone who’s had a bad day or is currently coping with a tough situation, compelling them to remember that – although life is not always simple – it is utterly valuable. This prose can also serve as a lovely something to read before someone heads off to bed, for it is very reassuring; it will gift him or her will a sense of calm so that, the following morning, they feel more invigorated and motivated to engage in exciting things. That being said, the world constantly presents its inhabitants with opportunities – they just have to be wise enough to take them rather than permit them to slip away, as you yourself confirm with the line “Have fun and live your best life!” A splendid and honest piece of advice!
While I adore the message of your work, I do wish that would convert its structure into a stanza/poem. I believe it would look a lot cleaner and more orderly if you separated each sentence into its own individual line. For example, you start several sentences with the word “Live,” so it would be visually appealing if the words (which you use three times in a row in this particular fashion) appeared right below each other, again and again, making the repetition more manifest. Just a suggestion, but it is your decision at the end of the day.
Also, I think that you should elaborate a little more on the phrase “Never do wrong things.” This sentence did not sit well with me personally because the word “wrong” feels a little ambiguous in this context. As human beings, we should be allowed to make mistakes and mess up because that’s how we learn and evolve from immaturity. Thus, I recommend that you clarify your assertion – perhaps by briefly alluding to the Ten Commandments? – in order to prevent any misconception.
Nevertheless, overall, I consider the general effect of this work to be positive, comforting, and beneficial! Well done!
thank you!