Dew drops drip from dim witted flowers
Soaking up sunshine for hours and hours
Clenching the cool breeze that clings to their petals
Beckoning the bees to bring bright colored yellows
Trees touching twigs that teeter and totter
Wind waving kindly to the wandering waters
Moistly mellow moss that sits on cold rocks
Lying in weight for life-saving loss
Quickly you hear a quaint pitter patter
As animals of different species all gather
To eat the fine food on a silver plate
And relish the royal feast that they recently ate
Poetry
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I’m really enjoying all of the work you’re sharing! Keep up the great work!
I’m a sucker for alliteration this this poem has won me over
Beautiful imagery! Great structure!
Suggestion:
-There are two instances of “feast” in the last line. Please correct.
Take care!
Michelle R.
Thank you for your feedback Michelle. I really appreciated it! Hope you take care as well.