Longing to hold you, in my arms so tight,
longing to touch you,
if only for one night…
Longing to gaze into your eyes that smile,
longing to kiss you,
if only for a little while…
Longing to caress your soft, gentle skin,
longing to share my love,
that I feel deep within…
Longing to hold you, in my arms you shall stay,
longing to give you my love,
it’s the only way…
Longing to keep you, deep within my heart,
longing to love you,
for our love shall it never depart…
Estella F. Saldivar
© copyright 2000
Poetry
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I really like this piece. Many people are held back when they try to use a particular rhyme scheme, causing their poem to not make sense, and not flow correctly. However, you did an amazing job of allowing your rhyme scheme to bring a you a successful, well-written , powerful poem. Great job!
Thank you so much…. I’m glad that you enjoyed it… I try to use words that will have deep meaning and make sense.. That when others read my poetry, one can truly feel that it comes from the soul… I’m hoping to post all my poetry so others can enjoy their true meaning…
Again, thank you..
Estella