I’ve had super-natural powers since I turned 29 and for 2 years now I have been in control on and off and I give up or lose control once in a while. I suffer once in a while. I am always plagued by the need to keep bad spirits and bad people at bay, being in control is hard for me and sometimes I want to commit suicide because I give up from every angle. I need to thrive and not just survive. I have an extreme good and bad side. I am really good at piano, and I want to be a philosopher. I have powers to heal, and I have powers to change things in the world. I can do pretty much anything.
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There was one line in this paragraph that really jumped out at me as I was reading through it and that was, “I need to thrive and not just survive.” I find this interesting because in my experience before I thrive I must learn to live first after having to survive for so long. In my knowledge, living and surviving are two very different things. We all lose control once every once and a while. Life throws bricks at us at full force sometimes. Sometimes no matter how hard we try to be in control, it is not always possible. I see a change of perspective between the first half of this paragraph compared to the second half. The first half you are pinpointing your struggles, while in the second half, you identify your strengths and need to use your powers to change the world. I really like that. Good job!
This is an extremely powerful piece in its ability to realize the extremities of human emotion, the good and the bad. Overall, focus on the positives of the powers that you do have, what you bring to this world, and continue to live life to its fullest. Never stop writing!