I used to love you.
And now I don’t.
Time felt wasted,
Time not wasted.
I used to love you.
Some day I won’t.
Poetry
4 Comments on “old love”
Great minimal structure here. I like how you’ve chosen to keep this poem simple and uncomplicated without sacrificing the story. This also has a nice cadence and rhythm when you read it aloud – sound is the quality I enjoy the most in poety writing. Excellent job!
thank you!
love this…simple writing with a potent story that so many can relate too
Great minimal structure here. I like how you’ve chosen to keep this poem simple and uncomplicated without sacrificing the story. This also has a nice cadence and rhythm when you read it aloud – sound is the quality I enjoy the most in poety writing. Excellent job!
thank you!
love this…simple writing with a potent story that so many can relate too
thank you so much!