this
is
what
we
know
the
bells ring
in
the snow
where
things
glitter
and
glow
until
we look
one step below
where
the purple haze of steps
that
spiral down
through
hallowed ground
the
you
hear
the
haunted sounds
until
we
look
one step below
Poetry
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The flow of this short poem is great – I am usually not a fan of rhyming in poetry but I really enjoy the flow of “the glitter and the glow only one step below.” Although short, you provide a decent amount of imagery in this poem. My only suggestion would be to expand upon this poem – you have a strong, dreamlike voice in this piece that would benefit from a longer work of poetry. Good job!