“Hekkar time to get up we are going to be late.” said my sister Heskah
“Right that was to day wasen’t it. Okay lets go” I said well druging my self out of my pod.
As I float in to the comunal room, I saw my sister adorend with coral and shels like she is trying to mimic cloths that other races use to define thiem self’s. I can kinds understand do to the fact she is half human and looks more like one but i wonder how the other Yakk’s will react.
“Are you wanting to be mocked even more or what?” As I said that she looked at me with a said but understanding expresion on her face.
“Look once we prove that Takkar has not forsaken you as one of the Krash, you can do what you like with your looks, know that it will be dificalt to get a mate tho.” she looked at me for some time be for noding and leting the coral gentaly float to the floor.
As my sister left the peoka for the first time in a hundred years she looked on in aw. I had to strugle to keep up with her pace all those years racing through the tight vaine and cramped chambers of the peoka most of maid her a strong swimer.
“Slowdown sis I can’t keep up with this pace.” I had dificatly relaing as my focus was on controlling my breathing and not my thoughts. Some how she heard me tho so it worked out.
“Oh sorry, I got so exsited at how butiful Takkar looks and the wild life we have here. I’m glad im finaly alowed out of the peoka ours is so cramped and small compared to others, it feels nice to move out in the open.”
“That’s fine and dandy but you don’t even know where to go and we don’t have time to sight see right now.”
“Sorry brother your right I’ll follow your lead.”
(ather note this is all i have of the first chappter right now i will delete this note when its done.)
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Hey shadow! Really interesting concept!. side note, do you have microsoft word? It would really help you catch some of your spelling/punctuation mistakes. I know Noah Writing also has an editing service you could use before uploading!
No I don’t and corection software has never helped me most of the time the word I mean is not even a valible to pick do to how bad I spell most of the time.
Thanks for the info but the only thing I can do is have help from a person and in this case i’ll have my moms help tho its not going to be right a way.
Thanks I hope it keeps you interasted as I add to it