I have gone through the “I am not a robot” so many times
my blood pressure is rising;
Smoke is pumping through my ears;
My eyes near fills with tears.
I am a simple poet,
searching to improve;
like a beginner track star
“Coach help me quicker run this tar.”
Poetry
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I like the relatable humor in the first stanza; I have definitely gotten frustrated with the recaptcha “I am not a robot” test before – it was at this point I regretted putting my phone in Spanish to help me learn…
Just a quick suggestion. Move “run this tar” to a new line. It’ll help keep your rhythm steady for the reader:
I am a simple poet,
searching to improve;
like a beginner track star,
“Coach help me quicker
run this tar.”
That’s it. Nice job!