CHAPTER:1
All my life I have felt empty, like I have no soul, that is until I met Scar. His parents where apart of the Seven Deadly Sins and they where powerful, so I have herd from my mom. Our parents know each other but didn’t tell us because they where afraid we might do exactly what we did. Scar and I got all of the Seven Deadly Sin’s kids and made another Seven Deadly Sins but we needed to call is something else but what? what could we do I don’t know.. “Hay Nanami” he said with consern, “yeah?” what does he want I was in the middle of figguring out what our name should be, “I-I-I I was wondering if you-” before he could say what he wanted he was cutt off by Ethin and he looked pretty upset, ” IF YOU DO IT I SWEAR TO GOD!!!” he roared do what? What was Ethin talking about?
TO BE CONTINUED…………..
Fairy Tales
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What should the name for the next Seven Deadly Sins be???????
Maybe you could call them “Seven White Sins”? You know, because it comes from the term “white lies,” which are intended to be little, harmless lies and you’re also writing about the original Sins’ children, so they’re smaller than their parents in age. Heh…Or not.
I enjoy reading Fan Fic, but it’s hard to enjoy when there are a lot of typos or errors in the piece. A lot of issues breaks the illusion and sucks the fun out of the story from a reader’s perspective. Is English your first language? If not, there are free editing services available that could help you with some basic grammatical errors.