You don’t like the sound of shots, but you give me the ammunition.
Poetry
5 Comments on “shots awry”
This short poem made me think deeply, and for some reason, I think many of us can relate to this. Perhaps it’s hypocrisy from a metaphorical gun and ammunition, or it’s more physical and real. Regardless, I loved the poem.
Thank you! I’m glad that this piece allowed you to think deeply about what it may mean and what is behind those words.
This reminds me when my creative writing teacher gave us an assignment to to write a story in 25 words or less. You defiantly would have gotten an A on the assignment.
This was great! Super special that you were able to convey so much emotion in one sentence. In a way, you’re leaving the readers to come up with their own version of events which gives your story some versatility. I agree with the commenter above who said this would fit right in with the 25 words or less story. It was my first immediate thought. Great job!
I couldn’t agree more with the previous comments on your poem. Its almost as if you’ve built our story, but at the same time gave us room to complete it and fill in the details. It certainly makes you think, and I’ve read really really long poems that have never caused me to think as deep as this one does. It shows how much talent you have in such a short amount of words. Great job.
This short poem made me think deeply, and for some reason, I think many of us can relate to this. Perhaps it’s hypocrisy from a metaphorical gun and ammunition, or it’s more physical and real. Regardless, I loved the poem.
Thank you! I’m glad that this piece allowed you to think deeply about what it may mean and what is behind those words.
This reminds me when my creative writing teacher gave us an assignment to to write a story in 25 words or less. You defiantly would have gotten an A on the assignment.
This was great! Super special that you were able to convey so much emotion in one sentence. In a way, you’re leaving the readers to come up with their own version of events which gives your story some versatility. I agree with the commenter above who said this would fit right in with the 25 words or less story. It was my first immediate thought. Great job!
I couldn’t agree more with the previous comments on your poem. Its almost as if you’ve built our story, but at the same time gave us room to complete it and fill in the details. It certainly makes you think, and I’ve read really really long poems that have never caused me to think as deep as this one does. It shows how much talent you have in such a short amount of words. Great job.