This poem is very powerful for readers who are struggling with addiction. You did an excellent job. However, I do suggest to go back and add some punctuation to your piece. I will give the poem pauses and help the reader understand what is being said.
Thank you for your feedback. Appreciate it. it DOES have punctuation, probably is just too small to see, given that this is a picture and not text. I’m not sure why i posted the image, but no better for subsequent posts. Thanks for your feedback.
This poem is very powerful for readers who are struggling with addiction. You did an excellent job. However, I do suggest to go back and add some punctuation to your piece. I will give the poem pauses and help the reader understand what is being said.
Thank you for your feedback. Appreciate it. it DOES have punctuation, probably is just too small to see, given that this is a picture and not text. I’m not sure why i posted the image, but no better for subsequent posts. Thanks for your feedback.
Know better…..heh. (typo above)