her feathers fluttered in anticipation
full of joy, full of love
as the wind skipped across her back
she shivered
she gasped with happiness
for she had found the one who made her happy
she was a song bird
she was in love
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I love the turn in your poem! It comes at exactly the right time. I wonder what made you choose to continue the second line instead of breaking it at “joy” and beginning a new line?