Jeff was well! struggling in his walk with almighty DAD JESUS. Many would say that Jeff wasn’t trying hard enough to be a good person. Jeff probably wouldn’t agree. Jeff has always been someone who wanted to try to be perfect as even almighty DAD JESUS is and was.
Sadly that that kind of thinking and wanting to be perfect are not realistic thinking. Jeff has to rely on almighty DAD JESUS every single day he wakes up and is scratching his head. Thinking! Why! DAD, Why! DAD JESUS might say stop worrying. You can do this. However! You can’t do any of it on your own. I need to be along for the right
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Oh I love this. It really speaks to my soul and tells of what every human needs in life–they need the God of heaven to constantly sustain them.
I understand that this story is like flash fiction, but I strangely want to know more about Jeff and what worries him. And also sweetheart, you need to watch out for your grammar which includes your diction. Take a couple more sweeps of these couple of paragraphs and make the needed adjustments.