If only I could transfer to you the beautiful hum echoing in my mind. If you could hear it, then I’d also show you the picture that plays along with it; And if you could see and hear the things I do, then I’d wish that you’d understand and it would make you feel what I feel. However, then you wouldn’t see what you see when your without me, and that would be boring.
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This is a very pretty paragraph of prose. However, I’d love to actually see the picture that goes along with the “beautiful hum” echoing in your head, and what they see when they’re without you. Some more imagery would really make this striking!
Nice!