It was the night of halloween. Kids visited the old man’s house. Knocking on the door. An old man greeted the children. As the kids walked through the old house. The floor board made squeaking sounds as the children walked. The old man allowed the children to walk through the old house full of dust and spider webs. The old man giggled as the children ran around the house. The second floor where two kids went, was too dark to walk. The boy and the girl ventured the dark rooms on the second floor. The kids on the first floor had already had there fun and left the old house. The old man knew the two kids had ventured off up stairs. The wind blew through the holes through the roof. The wind made whistling sounds that would make you quiver. Out of nowhere appeared flames , the voice seemed to be heard by only the children upstairs. The children listened closely as the voice warned them that tonight the old man will die. The children gasped. They ran down towards the stairs as they headed out the door. The old man went up the stairs slowly hoping to catch the children. Instead the old man had seen the flames and heard the voice and screamed. The old man had died. The voice was the devil. The devil said tonight you die for your debts.
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Quite a scary incident! The tale abruptly fore closed it looks.leaving the reader clueless.Add a few more lines to give it a logical end. But for this rhe naration is good………..kranand