"The psysco babysitter"
Ok so where should i start oh, there. So on May 15, 2018 it was my parents Anniversary and they wanted to go out so they said i had to get a babysitter and i said “WHAT mom please no i dont want a babysitter” cmon Jay please i dont wanna do this my mom said. ok fine but who is it. a girl named ”BEBE” (baby). My dad said . ok i am gonna go play xbox. ( 15 mins later) ” knocks on door” me : i’ll get it . Hey who are u she says (bebe) i am the one ur babysitting ur bebe right nice to meet u bebe right”. Yeah ” my mom says oh bebe hey uhhh were gonna go bed time is 10:00 dinner is in fridge and yeah take a bath and brush teeth and oh PRAY” bebe says ok so do i . closes door” then bebe pulls out a cig and i say WOAH WHAT ARE U DOING WE DONT SMOKE PLUS GO OUTSIDE bebe says IDC i do what i want now lets play a game i will throw away my cig ok. ok lets play hide n seek and hide good ok. ok i as 10 so i hid in my moms closet.(18 mins later) hmmmm where is she, then i her a mans voice huh i know theres no man then i hear banging on my moms closet and i burst out WOAH bebe says HEY GET OUT OF THE HOUSE” i said NO THIS IS MY HOUSE” get out or i will beat up up” bebe says i stand right where i was then she gets up and starts running towards me WITH A KNIFE.
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Drama
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