Having a war in your mind should
be illegal
fighting the human brain is dangerous
But we all can not help it
it is contagious
why am I an overthinking
I sketch myself out and think
the worse
then I get upset and I am
ready to disperse
Poetry
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Fighting the demons inside our minds is a tiring war. Good analogy on your part.
Suggestions:
-Remove “an” found in front of “overthinking”
-“Worst” is the superlative you’re looking for
-Watch for capitalization and punctuation!
I really enjoyed the line: “fighting the human brain is dangerous”
Isn’t it beautifully peculiar that it WAS the human brain that thought of the above line??? Crazy cool.
Keep writing!
Thank you love
Listen to your soul. Take time to actually listen to it. Don’t let it over run you. Your soul is trying to wake you up but if you can listen then you’ll be able to live again!