I left her side
Suddenly my body isn’t mine
I’m living my life
But I’m watching it
I’m saying things
But I’m not
I’m doing things
But they aren’t my actions
I’m trying to shake the feeling
So I drink a bottle of Chardonnay
I don’t feel nothing
I’m thinking of every possibility for this feeling
But nothing comes to mind
Am I mad ?
Am I depressed?
Am I entering a new chapter?
All I know is I want more wine
I’m not writing this
I’m reading it
You can say I’m on drugs
Or you can say I’m trying something new
This feeling is pretty intriguing
What is this?
Poetry
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Your title needs editing. “What’s is this?” is confusing and redundant. I think a great and easy fix is “What is this?” Also, if you want to know more about the feeling you’re trying to convey in this poem–which you did well, by the way–try Googling “depersonalization symptoms” or “derealization symptoms.” Maybe it will inspire you to explore this concept further?
This is intriguing! It makes me wonder I love it!