When love is gone…
Life does go on…
When tears stop falling,
you have the strength to move on.
When you have the strength to move on,
the possibilities are endless
Poetry
One Comment on “When Love Is Gone”
This is a nice little poem that has a lot of potential. My biggest suggestion is to add more to this piece. You already have a nice rhythm to it, so keep going. The ending sounds really rushed. I agree you should keep, “the possibilities are endless”, as the last line, but add some more before it.
This is a nice little poem that has a lot of potential. My biggest suggestion is to add more to this piece. You already have a nice rhythm to it, so keep going. The ending sounds really rushed. I agree you should keep, “the possibilities are endless”, as the last line, but add some more before it.