Easy to lose your way in life, your lost and others ridicule. Sometimes you just need a soft hand, a loving heart, and a compassionate mind when you lose your way!
Was it a fight
silly argument
slept in my car that night
fool’s sentiment
now a heart that don’t belong
such a feeling of lost
what went wrong
I think I lost my way!
Right, left, it doesn’t matter
up or down what do I care
my world shattered
lost, yes more than can bear
you said, “just psychological”
heck yeah, a mental case
what do you care, not your problem
lost my way and for me ..no place.
You found another
now he’s your home
he’s your lover
me, no place but alone
I’d call that lost, wouldn’t you?
easy nonchalant words spew
talk comes easy from a tongue high
but in the gutter try your way and find!
Poetry
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I really like how your words portrayed the desperation and confusion that comes with stepping off a path you’ve set for yourself. I’m sure a lot of people can relate, as life tends to change plans whenever it wants. The final line came out a bit fragmented, though, but I can see the nice rhyme and comparison you were going for with it; it just reads a bit like the way Yoda speaks in Star Wars.
Yeah, you made me laugh at myself and the way I did write it, hopefully I can think of better words to fix it, thanks for your comment and help.