"Where Does It Hurt?"
by jeffp526
show me, if you dare, for I do care
where does it hurt
there’s no need to hide your pain
I’m here to lend a hand
show me where it hurts…no need
to hide your pain, for I really do
care
no, your not alone, I’m here by
your side, just tell me, please,
where does it hurt
no need to hide your pain
God has sent me to lend a hand
I really do care…don’t give up,
don’t despair for God really does
care
show me where it hurts
a broken heart can be mended
if you trust me, please, just show me,
where does it hurt
a broken heart can be mended
Poetry
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Your poem gives off the feeling of having a loved one worry about you, whispering that “it is all right.” The repetition really helps this, as sometimes all you can do to quiet the voices in someone’s head is drown them out with loving words of your own. This is a fantastic poem!