The Amazing Angel
By: A.L.Y
Please, may we always venerate, bless, praise, and thank, our excellent God for continuously guiding, helping, and giving us the ability and capacity to think and write from deep within our heart and mind, and universe, leading the way and never ever letting us give up! Don’t change. Just stay, and don’t leave, and always treat us fair. Do your best. We love you God!
Once upon this vibrant, exciting, serene, and captivating day, there was this optimistic, intuitive, and vivacious and charming sixteen-year-old girl whose name was April. She had burnt sienna hair and green eyes. She was indeed very attractive, and equally intelligent, yet she was only aware of what other people were noticing and thinking of her, and she seldom cared much about what she knew and considered about herself and her personal view of the things in life. What a sweet, loving, and dear girl she was and had always been. She loved to learn new concepts and learned new things almost every day. She paid attention in school, never skipped classes, and would always ask lots of innovative questions. She was intrigued by nature, and she was eager to try new things, and had always been a good listener. She always made good decisions because she wanted to have optimal outcomes in the end. She loved to compliment other people and be honest about the good things. She gives those generous gifts and helpful advice and shows them a lot of love and attention. April counted her blessings, and was always focused on bringing delight to all with every step she takes and every morning that she wakes. She has a strong fondness for pets. She had a beautiful dark blue parakeet. She named her parakeet “Sapphire-Blue.” April was always a precious and sweet girl with a mindset that was always at peace. She listened to her inner voice, always knew what was the right thing to do base on what her heart told her, and she put her thoughts in order precisely. She was a straight A student. She would always follow exactly what her mind told her to do. She let her deep sense of intuition lead her towards the correct pathway. She always handled her life with grace and love and she always had a perpetual sense of hope that kept her holding true to her dreams and remaining true to her innermost emotions. No matter what the situation she could handle it. Nothing fazed her. She was well coordinated. She was optimistic, and always reassured herself that as long as she made the right choices she would excel. She was clear-sighted. She always did her best with everything life handed her. She was a deep and philosophical thinker, and her pragmatic advice helped and benefited others including her. She loves God because he made everything in nature, and He’s the best thinker. April was extremely gifted and loved to play the piano. When she played she could do amazing things for the world. April is so charming and she gets a lot of attention from the guys. April was an unselfish person. She was never mean or annoying or a snob. April’s life was mixed up with different kinds of pleasures, and very little pain to be felt. She was naturally a girl with only good choices to be made. She warmed up the room wherever she went with her peaceful karma. April is so inspiring and very well informed. She is like a walking dictionary and walking self-esteem. April is amazing. She was always interested in pragmatism (practical approaches to problems) and stem cell research. New ideas and things she agrees and disagrees with. April loves life and she loves to read. April was born up high with both of her parents up in the soft and bouncy clouds with the rainbow shining on her. They were weightless ghosts, but after they earned their human frames, they thanked God with all their heart and they only made optimal decisions in life, and love to help people and all living things. But unlike her parents, April had inherent powers, and could heal and do amazing things with her spirit and mind to make good things appear to make people rich and happy over time. April was endowed with this amazing, sharp, low and high, singing voice that God blessed her with because she proved to Him that she was the chosen-One. He named her the green-eyed Princess. (Also known as the Dragonfly Goddess.) She had bright green eyes and peach fuzz on her arms and legs. She discovered her powers because she had an injury that she chose to try to heal it on her own, and God gave her simple guidance and advice, and though she’d been through some obstacles, eventually she got the hang of it and ended up healing herself and staying pure. Soon April found a man that had powers too, so they had a lot of unique times together. Without them the world would be so impure and boring and full of things that don’t matter. But April always mattered to God. But she had to bloom like a flower to God’s world. Whenever she had a good idea she made it happen and brought to life. She resisted temptation. She never got depressed because she always had the right mindset to keep her going in life. She was apt at coping with the feeling of transition between being awake and going to sleep. She never went too far in any extreme with her thoughts. She was the chosen one. God called her the Dragonfly Goddess. She helped others with every part of their lives, with her super-human mind. Whenever something really bad happens to her or anyone else in the vicinity of her, she utilizes her deep sense of intuition and 6th sense to fix them or the bad situation they’re dealing with. April was bulletproof. Even hot devils couldn’t seduce her. She was strong and held on long. She never ran out of things to say or think about. She was a true beauty, and her eyes were expressive, dreamy, distinctive and very bold. April enjoyed trying new things every day. Singing is her forte. She has always been blessed by God, and God helps her with her everyday life. God helps her with her driving, and she was always happy. She met a guy that was just like a calculator. Everything he did was perfecto. He was serious. He was deep. He was philosophical. He was a big sweetheart! Everything he did was so amazing. He always gives people a second chance (plus more). April utilized her mind to help people and do good deeds. April loves God and was really close to Him. She and God always got along, and God was also unchanging love for her and everyone else. She hated violence.
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Wow, April is incredible. I can only hope that by the end of my life I’ll become half of what she is.
This story is very endearing, it lifts my spirits and puts a smile on my space. If a “feel-good” tale was all you were going for ignore this next half. My main critique is that you labelled this a short story. I think you hit all the bases with characterization and letting us know who April is, but I was curious about the plot of this story. I think for the betterment of this piece you need to really bring that out. So when you’re in your writing bubble think of an issue April can encounter. It can be that she is the only pure being and that everyone else has hints of evil in them.
Also, when you are writing make sure you try and stick to one tense. When you switch back and forth from past to present it confuses the reader. Don’t worry I do it too. It’s something that us writers have to look out for.
What I enjoyed most about this story is your heart. In the words, I can tell the author is a genuinely good person who wants to change the world with her writing; this is oh do important. With the proper revisions this story can truly reach its fullest potential.