Nothing sophisticated
Little more than friendship
Don’t want complicated
On nothing this heart fixed
Words this heart serious
Felt same as you
My heart wasn’t ready tho’
Soft words spew
My heart as a sponge soak
and ..well ready or not!
Your heart spoke directly
My heart infatuated
Spinning incorrectly
My heart knew the rules
Yet never hesitated
Step over the boundaries
Break your laws
Love now the surroundings
Hearing only loving calls
Ready or not renegade heart
Now scared your reaction
Your forewarning summation
Broken sanctions
Runaway heart
Out of control emotions
Needed you from the start
Just didn’t know
How soft and plush
Tender love your heart flow
Ready or not you said let our hearts go!!
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I love the last line, “Ready or not you said let our hearts go!!” It sounded nice and beautiful. I do suggest to make the one line into two. I think it would sound really nice to split the line between “not” and “you”. Another suggestion, for your story as a whole, I would go back and unitalicize the piece. It is not needed. I would also work on not having so many lines. It makes the poem sound really choppy and confuses the reader the meaning of the poem.
Thanks for the suggestions and you are right, thanks again.