The not so innocent but intentional truth buried in her chest had traveled with the meteor for nine hundred eighteen billion years and as the words released its meaning, the pain had been the only purpose and finally, it was delivered and the mother source in a timeless move accomplished its purpose
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This is really deep and although it is, it has an effortless flow, great job! This would be a captivating intro to a story which leads me to want further development of the piece.
Here are few notes:
1. I understand if you want the drama of spelling out each numerical value since the number is enormous, but I would consider formatting as so:
=== nine hundred eighteen billion years
[918 billion years]
2. The noun and pronoun don’t agree here:
=== as the words released its meaning,
as the words released [their] meaning,
3. Consider switching out one of the ‘purpose’ words with a synonym
==== the pain had been the only [objective] and finally, it was delivered and the mother source in a timeless move accomplished its purpose
Thanks for contributing, keep up the great writing!