Love, what is the first word that comes to mind when you hear love forever or how about till death due us part, well your wrong love is something deeper it’s where two partners can talk about anything and not feel uncomfortable it’s about something deeper than just 3 simple words you’ll know if you’ve been in love because it’s not just an attraction it’s an attachment. Love is where your heart does a little thump out of your chest when you hear there voice or waiting for a text back, Love is the one thing that never dies.
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As someone who is deeply in love, I definitely agree with the overall sentiments here; however, I would be more careful to proofread, as the run-on sentences are somewhat distracting.
Love is a precious thing. I too agree with the statements made here regarding love. In fact, I find that the attachment and friendship aspect of love the greatest gift of all. On another note, I do agree with CoughlinJorgan about the structure of some of these sentences. Perhaps it would flow better if you broke some of the long sentences down into multiple ones so that you can separate the different ideas.