Patterns in my head;
patterns in my heart;
patterns on my skin;
are all tearing me apart.
Poetry
One Comment on “Patterns”
Such a heart-wrenching poem.
Suggestion:
-The semi-colons could be easily replaced with commas and have the same effect. It’s up to you and your writing style! 🙂
-Perhaps switching the title to convey an actual emotion?
Such a heart-wrenching poem.
Suggestion:
-The semi-colons could be easily replaced with commas and have the same effect. It’s up to you and your writing style! 🙂
-Perhaps switching the title to convey an actual emotion?
Would want to read longer pieces!
Michelle R.