tired of my life feeling like a game
my mind so wild it cannot be tame
I miss my old life
Nothing is the same
I can not bare to stay any longer
I am not getting a stronger
It’s better off I Say Goodbye
for I longer want to hurt anymore
Death is what is best
now it is time to rest
Poetry
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Masarati, you make great use of rhyme in your poem. By sticking to couplets, it really makes “for I [no] longer want to hurt anymore” stand out making it all the more potent. Other than a few grammatical errors, well done! I hope to see more of your work soon. You’ve got potential.
Thank you so much
This poem has such raw and organic emotions, and you really have a gift. Keep writing!
Thank you so much I really appreciate it that is my goal to make every emotion/feeling … real and raw