I would love to see this poem expanded on. The last line is powerful and leaves me wanting to read on! The fact that you were able to add in imagery and a story in a little amount of space is great. I like the concept of storms being affected by your mood, when it is usually the other way around. This concept can definitely be explored further. Good job!
I would love to see this poem expanded on. The last line is powerful and leaves me wanting to read on! The fact that you were able to add in imagery and a story in a little amount of space is great. I like the concept of storms being affected by your mood, when it is usually the other way around. This concept can definitely be explored further. Good job!