CHEERs to those many nights
were thought were gonna die
cheers to those many nights
we felt we were living life right
living life right
cheers to being ourselves
its okay to love yourselves
i miss those day we drunk wine
those night we waited at concerts in line
mall those times we went in the wild
and we tried to swing on vines
those nights we went off roading
in that old ass trunk
cops were called
but we did not give a fuck
we lived our lives to the fullest
to the fullest
Poetry
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Cheers to living life to the fullest! It’s great to be here
I enjoyed reading this piece. There are a few grammatical errors, but it is a good poem. I enjoyed the rhyming parts because it helped to tie the entirety of the poem together. A stricter rhyme scheme might create even more togetherness, but the way you used rhymes allows for more creative freedom. I am glad that you repeated the last line. This works to emphasize the main point of your poem.
I love the line of “its okay to love yourselves.” Yes to this poem and all its implications of life’s stupid, delightful little moments. Keep writing because all your pieces are lovely, and I can’t wait to read them all!