we grow up
and give up
we throw it away.
we mess up
and break up
I want you to stay.
we leave it and believe it
we make it okay.
we act it,
we think it,
it hurts us today.
we love it
we hate it
we keep it at bay.
we want it
we need it
but no one will say.
Poetry
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I love this piece. I am one of those writers who like to challenge the line. I believe that short, snappy lines create power for words. You might want to experiment with different length lines. By doing this, you will provide a flow to the piece. It would be like riding a roller coaster. Up, down, breathe deep, then up again.
Thank you so much! I will try it out!
Exactly